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GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 12:34, 22 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I'll be review your article soon. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:34, 22 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

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I meant alt, my bad here. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:21, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Lead

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Nothing was done regarding adding more information to the lead, also add the peak of the Chart performance. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:35, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Background and recording

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Both are correct, actually. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:26, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Composition

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 Done

Music videos

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  • The first video released was for "Craiglist", directed by Liam Lynch. → The first music video released was for the track "Craiglist", directed by Liam Lynch.
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:57, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Be aware of the ridirct of the "green screen".
    As long as it leads to where it needs to go, I don't see the issue, but I explicitly linked it to "Chroma key".--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:57, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Directed and created by is totally different a director might not create and in the former case he directed and animated, which is different.
    OK.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:57, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • In early August of the same year, a video for "CNR", created by JibJab, was released that animated the song using JibJab employees as actors against a green screen, interspersed with shots of Yankovic and Jon "Bermuda" Schwartz performing on a White Stripes-inspired red-and-white set, dressed as Jack White and Meg White, respectively → In early August of the same year, a video for "CNR", directed and animated by JibJab, was released. The animation used JibJab employees as actors against a green screen. It was interspersed with shots of Yankovic and Jon "Bermuda" Schwartz performing on a White Stripes-inspired red-and-white set, dressed as Jack White and Meg White, respectively.
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:57, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • created by SuperNews! → needless to say
    I changed to 'animated'.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:57, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Lastly, → Finally,
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:57, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • the video was released in 2011 → being released in 2011 and was included on...
    I just rewrote it in a different way.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:57, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Reception

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 Done

Track listing

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  • The following is adapted from the iTunes version of the album, as well as the liner notes from Alpocalypse → Is there any diference?If not you can leave the former reference.
    It's not really needed, so I just removed it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:57, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
You need them, just use the one that has the credits as well. See below the reason. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:32, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Use the Itunes metadata its better because Apocalypse has more engineers and other writers, but I only need those who did those songs. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:50, 26 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I changed it for the personnel but not the track listing, since that one isn't necessary.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:52, 27 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

References

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Not really, I fixed the first for you, do the same for the others. No double links, no publishers unless you choose to add publishers to all of them, work is mandatory and no double links. These are the main problems, see Billboard, A.V. Club and Wordpress references. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:50, 27 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Overall GA review

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I need a reference for that kind of information. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:28, 25 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:52, 27 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Gen. Quon: Some of them are still there. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:50, 26 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@MarioSoulTruthFan: OK, how about now?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:54, 27 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Gen. Quon: you missed a section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:50, 27 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Is the reference formatting section the only one left? If so, I think I have done what you want (although I will point out that per the GA requirements, they do not have to be perfect).--Gen. Quon (Talk) 13:25, 28 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I just asked for consistency. Now passing. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:54, 29 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]